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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Is there any problems with sentences?

Is there any problems with sentences?
Is there anything to change to make it grammatically correct and natural?

I always misplace my credit card. 75 percent of the time, my card is misplaced. When I have my card, that when I'm surprised. Most people are shocked when they lose their card. I'm shocked and surprised when I'm in possession of it.

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I feel surprised whenever my card is in place.

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  • I feel surprised whenever my card is in place.
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I feel surprised whenever my card is in place.
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Anonymous Is there any problems with sentences?Is there anything to change to make it grammatically correct and natural?I always misplace my credit card. 75 percent of the time, my card is misplaced. When I have my card, that when I'm surprised. Most people are shocked when they lose their card. I'm shocked and surprised when I'm in possession of it.Thanks
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Is it correct to use misplaced as an adjective?
...,my card is misplaced.

What is redundant, the whole last sentence or part of it?

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AnonymousIs it correct to use misplaced as an adjective?...,my card is misplaced.
Yes.
AnonymousWhat is redundant, the whole last sentence or part of it?
In your sentence, "shocked and surprised" is redundant.
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The whole last sentence is redundant? How would you say the last sentence with shocked and surprised?

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The phrase "shocked and surprised" is redundant. Use either "shocked" OR "surprised" but not both. In my opinion.
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I would not say "sad and unhappy" because it is redundant.
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No one said "sad and unhappy." What does that have to do with the original post?

Emotion: thinking
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It seems that the original poster doesn't understand what is redundancy, so I gave an example.
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