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——The publicity of " The18th National Congress of the Communist Party of China,Beneficial to All of Us" at Shenzhen Western Jewelry City
On the 20th of October 16:00 pm, the community publicity activity "The18th National Congress of the Communist Party of China,Beneficial to All of Us" opened with great ceremony at the cultural square of Shenzhen Western Jewelry City ( abbreviation: SWJC). It was organized by the Publicity Department of Baoan District of Chinese Communist and the Shenzhen Media Group Limited.

Promote Cultural Industry, Build Harmonious Society
According to the Vice-Manager Yi Huayou, SWJC, which is the the co-sponsor of this activity, aims at establishing harmonious society with the government, and dedicates to providing a platform to experience media culture for local resident. In terms of the cultural creativity, SWJC is the sub-venue of the 8th China ( Shenzhen ) International Cultural International Fair in 2012, the southern photography base of the CCTV program "Treasure Hunt" and the research base of China University of Geosciences, Beijing Institute of Clothing Technology, Shenzhen Technician Institute and many other institutes or universities. Moreover, SWJC forms the strategic relationship with the Ministry of Culture of China Cultural Media Group Limited. Shenzhen Western Jewelry City provides customers with full-scale professional services and always acts in accordance with high standards set by the industry.