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Sarah khan Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Is there any mistake in my paragraph?

'I personally feel that the best way to help your child in this age is to encourage his skills,I think structure,support and security should be your top three concerns for your child'.
  

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Hi Myla Good paragraph! Just a couple of suggestions. Personally , I feel that the best way to help your child at this age is to encourage his skills .

  • Hi Myla Good paragraph!
  • Just a couple of suggestions.
  • Personally , I feel that the best way to help your child at this age is to encourage his skills .
  • I believe that structure, support and security should be your top three concerns for your child'.
  • John
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Hi Myla
Good paragraph! Just a couple of suggestions.
Personally, I feel that the best way to help your child at this age is to encourage his skills. I believe that structure, support and security should be your top three concerns for your child'.
John
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thanks alot John.............Emotion: smile

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