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Turnem Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Is there any hope for my writing

As said in title, I would enormously appreciate input and advices, thanks. Here we go:


What makes a good writing, regardless if we are talking about blogs, or journalism, is a combination of the ideas and the technical ability. And the first one always prevails when it comes to my taste. If writer is able to come out with important and fresh ideas, than he will gain more of my attention. Of course, the technical side is not to be neglected. Writing is after all an art. The form of art that many people consider to be the most divine and above the others. My opinion is not far from that. Only the rare have the ability of combining the great, meaningful, lines together with the amazing form and crafting of the written word. In my modest opinion examples of such bravura are Milan Kundera or Paul Auster.

On the other hand there are writers with strikingly adorable technical abilities – their sentence is perfect, their clauses are breathtaking, but they are not telling us about anything. The more important – they are not saying anything new.

One of the most respectful writers in my language recently published a book which is all about the medieval time and about the circumstances on Balkans back then. The book was written exceptionally, with an incomparable style. True, some were saying that book is reminding a little bit of an other writer – Bosnian Nobelist Ivo Andric, whose obsessive subject was the medieval time on Balkans as well. I could not finish that book. It was written masterfully; no doubt it was a great piece of art. But it was not telling me anything. I was wondering why this writer, recognized and respected worldwide – took this subject that was already explored by so many. Recent happenings on Balkans, in the time of nineties are still screaming their way with the unsolved and shamefully neglected questions – the questions that needs to be resolved for the sake of not only the people of Southeastern Europe but for the sake of the whole world. Those questions are – the problem of the war criminals still on the loose; the questions of people deprived of their basic human rights; the question of unconstrained nationalistic orgies and many many more. I must say that I am terrified with a widely held notion that silence is the key.


The moment that we are living in is so rich in turbulences and if anything it's overflowing with numerous resources for writing and talking about it. Yes, that is what I am thinking about it – here where we are, and there is no much need to wander any further – lies everything that we need to talk about, to protest and to adore.
  

Top answer

Not 100% technically but you don't seem to have any really serious problems with your writing. There are a few basics you need to continue to work on, articles and prepostions for example, but overall you are expressing yourself well. Easy to read and understand, this is a piece of intelligent writing, and the few mistakes don't really detract too much.

  • Not 100% technically but you don't seem to have any really serious problems with your writing.
  • There are a few basics you need to continue to work on, articles and prepostions for example, but overall you are expressing yourself well.
  • Easy to read and understand, this is a piece of intelligent writing, and the few mistakes don't really detract too much.
  • There are one or two odd word choices.
  • I get the feeling you are using a dictionary to expand your vocabulary, which is admirable, but you have to remember that when words are listed as meanings or alternatives, they rarely work exactly as synonyms.
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Not 100% technically but you don't seem to have any really serious problems with your writing. There are a few basics you need to continue to work on, articles and prepostions for example, but overall you are expressing yourself well. Easy to read and understand, this is a piece of intelligent writing, and the few mistakes don't really detract too much.

There are one or two odd word choi
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Nona, thanks a lot for your opinion, I would appreciate it if you could point out what should be changed in the text above.

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