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Kunsusuki Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
is there any grammatical mistakes in my short paragraph
It is universally acknoleged that every start in possession of many actions and thrilling must be in need of a full stop the best example of that start was demenstrated by anonymous a teenager who lived between the edges of darkness where every move she makes was counted and criticised , anonymous lived a double life every thing she wanted was under the control of a voice coming from her head ,at the begining she thought that it was the call of good but step by step that voice was helding her from doing the things that she really wanted like magician spells
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Did you use an online translator to create this? It makes little sense, I'm sorry to say.
- Did you use an online translator to create this?
- It makes little sense, I'm sorry to say.
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Did you use an online translator to create this? It makes little sense, I'm sorry to say.
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Honestly, the reason maybe in my method of writing because when i start writing i think of the word or even the whole sentence using my local language;and as a result it seems like im using a translator and what it is worst is i get a really unrelated paragraph .is there any solutions to that?
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Maybe you can write shorter, simple sentences. Then the grammar will be right and you can put the words in as you translate them in your head.
This passage doesn't have the right parts of speech, and it really was too hard to understand what you mean.
This passage doesn't have the right parts of speech, and it really was too hard to understand what you mean.
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I made a little bit of changement hope it will become better
It is universally acknoleged that lives ends with a full stop named "Death",and it is weird how we are obliged to leave everything we reached and worked for ,from dreams to even the real understanding of the person himself because sometimes we as human beings we spend many year trying to pursue the real meaning of who we are and the
It is universally acknoleged that lives ends with a full stop named "Death",and it is weird how we are obliged to leave everything we reached and worked for ,from dreams to even the real understanding of the person himself because sometimes we as human beings we spend many year trying to pursue the real meaning of who we are and the
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I will say this again.
Maybe you could writer shorter, simpler sentences.
Maybe you could writer shorter, simpler sentences.
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do you mean that i have to avoid complex and compound-complex sentences ?
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kunsusukido you mean that i have to avoid complex and compound-complex sentences ?Yes. You cannot start combining clauses until you can write comprehensible simple sentences.
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