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Vivekanan_d Posted 19 years ago
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Is there any grammatical error in this?

0Hello,02br
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01b01i00 "BEYOND ALL LOVE MASCULINE HAS FOR MAIDENS"02i02b02br
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0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00is there any grammatical error in these lines,02font 02br 02br 01font 00 01b 01i 00 "BEYOND ALL LOVE MASCULINE HAS FOR MAIDENS"02i 02b 02font 02br 02br 00'Masculine' is not correct here, because it is an adjective. Your context appears to need a noun, 02br 02br 00eg 01b 01i 01font 00"BEYOND ALL LOVE MEN HAVE FOR MAIDENS"02font 02i 02b 02br 02br 00It's still an awkward-sounding title. The word 'maidens' is not often used today, and sounds rather old-fashioned.

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00is there any grammatical error in these lines,02font 02br 02br 01font 00 01b 01i 00 "BEYOND ALL LOVE MASCULINE HAS FOR MAIDENS"02i 02b 02font 02br 02br 00'Masculine' is not correct here, because it is an adjective.
  • Your context appears to need a noun, 02br 02br 00eg 01b 01i 01font 00"BEYOND ALL LOVE MEN HAVE FOR MAIDENS"02font 02i 02b 02br 02br 00It's still an awkward-sounding title.
  • The word 'maidens' is not often used today, and sounds rather old-fashioned.
  • 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-
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0Hi,02br
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01font00 01b01i00 "BEYOND ALL LOVE MASCULINE HAS FOR MAIDENS"02i02b02font02br
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00'Masculine' is not correct here, because it is an adjective.
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0 Thank you Clive. Well can't this ('masculine') be used as a personification here. I am talking about that there happen to be friends who loved each other, get women who ditch them and the friends realise they were happier when they were together. So in the title talking about the gender ('masculine') which is attracted to maidens. Would that be a considered an error? 0-
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0Hey there,02br
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00Thanks Clive. Never expected such a speedy reply. I further wanted to enquire can't 'masculine' here be used as a personification?02br
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00The book is friends who leved each other meet women who ditch them and they revert back to each other and realise they are happier with each other than with women. I'd be talking about the attr
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0How about:02br
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00BEYOND ALL MASCULINE LOVE FOR MAIDENS0-
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0Hi,02br
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01font00can't 'masculine' here be used as a personification?02font02br
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00Well, why just refer to one gender in this way but not the other?02br
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00eg 01b01i00"BEYOND ALL LOVE THE MASCULINE HAS FOR THE FEMININE"02i02b02br
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