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Yiyihimura Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Is there any Grammar mistake or awkard phrases in the following sentences?
Is there any Grammar mistake or awkard phrases in the following sentences?
If there is no grammar mistake, should these sentences be written better? (e.g. no awkard phrases)
" Through my volunteer experiences, I have also developed my interpersonal skills."
"Having turned into a well rounded, open- minded, and optimistic person, I am good at socializing and getting along with people."
"Furthermore, I can speak English and Japanese fluently, and with my language ability I am able to understand our world from different angles in a wide scope."
"I also worked as a sales representative/clerk i for two years, so I have the foundation of basic accounting and secretarial skills and have gained hands-on experiences. "
Thank you very much for helping me with my grammar knowledge!!
If there is no grammar mistake, should these sentences be written better? (e.g. no awkard phrases)
" Through my volunteer experiences, I have also developed my interpersonal skills."
"Having turned into a well rounded, open- minded, and optimistic person, I am good at socializing and getting along with people."
"Furthermore, I can speak English and Japanese fluently, and with my language ability I am able to understand our world from different angles in a wide scope."
"I also worked as a sales representative/clerk i for two years, so I have the foundation of basic accounting and secretarial skills and have gained hands-on experiences. "
Thank you very much for helping me with my grammar knowledge!!
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Hello, yiyihimura - and welcome to English Forums. " "I also worked as a sales representative/ clerk for two years, so I have a foundation of basic accounting and secretarial skills and have gained hands-on experience . "
- Hello, yiyihimura - and welcome to English Forums.
- " "I also worked as a sales representative/ clerk for two years, so I have a foundation of basic accounting and secretarial skills and have gained hands-on experience .
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Hello, yiyihimura - and welcome to English Forums. I have just a few suggestions (in bold):
"Through my volunteer experiences, I have also developed my interpersonal skills."
"Having turned into a well-rounded, open-minded, and optimistic person, I am good at socializing and getting along with people."
"Furthermore, I can speak English and Japanes
"Through my volunteer experiences, I have also developed my interpersonal skills."
"Having turned into a well-rounded, open-minded, and optimistic person, I am good at socializing and getting along with people."
"Furthermore, I can speak English and Japanes
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