Is There Any Fault in These Sentences
Hey guys,
I am not good at grammar & writing, so I come here to ask for your help.
1. Premium Material: 316 stainless steel is better than 304 stainless steel, (or delete the "," add "with"?) excellent waterproof and anti-rust performance.
2. Damage-Free Installation & Uninstallation: These handy hooks are no drill needed and very easy to install, also can be removed without leaving any residue.
3. Wide Applications: Providing a reliable place to keep your items, ideal for kitchen, bathroom, bedroom, office and so on.
Many thanks,
Gino.
Top answer
I will assume you are talking about a single product and listing the qualities that make it a good buy. If that is incorrect, I would change my wording. (Do you have an introduction?
- I will assume you are talking about a single product and listing the qualities that make it a good buy.
- If that is incorrect, I would change my wording.
- (Do you have an introduction?
- "Our product is superior for these three reasons:") 1.
- Premium Material: Constructed of 316 stainless steel is better than 304 stainless steel, with excellent waterproof and anti-rust performance.
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I will assume you are talking about a single product and listing the qualities that make it a good buy. If that is incorrect, I would change my wording.
(Do you have an introduction? "Our product is superior for these three reasons:")
1. Premium Material: Constructed of 316 stainless steel is better than 304 stainless steel, with excellent waterpro
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