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Pacific Fisher Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Is there any error in the following sentence:

"However, the incidence of this disorder may be lower among Asian and African than among Caucasian because only few papers about this disorder published from Asia and Africa."
  

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Pacific Fisher"However, the incidence of this disorder may be lower among Asian and African than among Caucasian because only few papers about this disorder published from Asia and Africa."

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"However, the incidence of this disorder may be lower among Asian and African than Caucasian because only few papers about th
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Original:
"However, the incidence of this disorder may be lower among Asian and African than among Caucasian because only few papers about this disorder published from Asia and Africa."

Better:
"Few papers about this disorder have been published from Asia and Africa. This suggests that the incidence of this disorder may be lower among Asian and African populations than among
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