I have a introductory paper, limited to 1 paragraph, that's due on Thursday. Stduents pick their own topic about physical item of their choice. I picked "Shades" as in sun-glasses for the title. The sentence I'm not happy with is a bit of a mouthful and doesn't seem to flow ell, it reads:
"But you make us look like easily offended, touchy-
I suggest "But you make us look/seem like touchy,humourless people, which we are not, and you come across like/as a jerk."
I wouldn't say 'touchy-feeling'. You are thinking of the adjective 'touchy-feely', which means 'very, very sensitive and emotional'. That's not what you mean in your sentence.