Is example 1 or 2 right? I can't figure it out. Should i put a comma after women and before mainline, or have no commas at all in the second sentence? Thank you!
1.) It's the holiday party of the century. Men and women, dressed in there best St. John, mainline chardonnay near a lavish indoor pool.
2.) It's the holiday party of the century. Men and women, dressed in there best St. John, mainline chardonnay near a lavish indoor pool.
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" their best" not "there best". (1) and (2) are identical. I would include the commas.
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" their best" not "there best".
(1) and (2) are identical.
I would include the commas.
It makes the sentence easier to read, especially around "St.
John mainline chardonnay" which is not the easiest sequence of words to parse.
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I would include the commas. It makes the sentence easier to read, especially around "St. John mainline chardonnay" which is not the easiest sequence of words to parse.