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Leecarlton Posted 14 years ago
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Is there a better way to write these sentences? I feel it might be redundant
If you think it is good, that would be great to know as well 
Alongside his academic duties, Daniel was also heavily involved within the athletics department. He has served as coach for the track team at Sag Harbor Middle School and wrestling coach at Hampton Bays Middle School.
Alongside his academic duties, Daniel was also heavily involved within the athletics department. He has served as coach for the track team at Sag Harbor Middle School and wrestling coach at Hampton Bays Middle School.
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In addition to his academic duties, Daniel was also heavily involved with the athletics department, serving as track and field coach at Sag Harbor Middle School and wrestling coach at Hampton Bays Middle School.
- In addition to his academic duties, Daniel was also heavily involved with the athletics department, serving as track and field coach at Sag Harbor Middle School and wrestling coach at Hampton Bays Middle School.
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In addition to his academic duties, Daniel was also heavily involved with the athletics department, serving as track and field coach at Sag Harbor Middle School and wrestling coach at Hampton Bays Middle School.
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