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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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"The government cannot support any tolerance of faith if that republic employs those men favoring one. Their views, therefore, would be inevitable to conform to their faith which will indirectly show its hostility towards religious system. Therefore this religious tolerance would only be a title with no substance."
  

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Hi, "The government cannot support any tolerance of faith if that republic employs those men favoring one. Their views, therefore, would be inevitable to conform to their faith which will indirectly show its hostility towards religious system. " Did you write this?

  • Hi, "The government cannot support any tolerance of faith if that republic employs those men favoring one.
  • Their views, therefore, would be inevitable to conform to their faith which will indirectly show its hostility towards religious system.
  • " Did you write this?
  • Or is it a piece of old-fashioned English that you found somewhere?
  • In terms of modern English, it reads awkwardly.
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Hi,

"The government cannot support any tolerance of faith if that republic employs those men favoring one. Their views, therefore, would be inevitable to conform to their faith which will indirectly show its hostility towards religious system. Therefore this religious tolerance would only be a title with no substance."

Did you write this? Or i

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