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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Is the wording fine here?
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Is the wording fine here?
Bobb treats the learning process with care, he has self-organization skills and is slightly shy.
Is the wording fine here?
Bobb treats the learning process with care, he has self-organization skills and is slightly shy.
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It is a comma splice. You can change the comma to a semicolon or start a new sentence at that point. The name is normally spelled "Bob".
- It is a comma splice.
- You can change the comma to a semicolon or start a new sentence at that point.
- The name is normally spelled "Bob".
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It is a comma splice. You can change the comma to a semicolon or start a new sentence at that point.
The name is normally spelled "Bob".
The name is normally spelled "Bob".
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AnonymousIs the wording fine here?Not really.
1. I can't see any logical connection between being slightly shy and the rest of the sentence.
2. "Bob" is not usually spelt with one "B" at the end.
3. You need a semicolon instead of your comma.
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