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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is the "victory that...Dragonarmy" part of this sentence correct?

The dragonlances were immediately sent to the High Clerist’s Tower, where they had a significant role in the victory that the Heroes of the Lance and the Solamnics achieved over the Blue Dragonarmy.
  

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You can reduce the verbiage with: the victory of the Heroes of the Lance and the Solamnics over the Blue Dragonarmy.

— Philip

  • You can reduce the verbiage with: the victory of the Heroes of the Lance and the Solamnics over the Blue Dragonarmy.
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You can reduce the verbiage with: the victory of the Heroes of the Lance and the Solamnics over the Blue Dragonarmy.
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