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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is the use of 'in addition' a good choice?
Takhisis ultimately failed in her quest to conquer Krynn and the returned gods of magic agreed to restore Dalamar’s life and magic, but his body retained the bleeding sores caused by Raistlin. In addition, as his penance for aiding Takhisis, Dalamar was barred from returning to the Tower of Nightlund.
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Yes, it's okay, but it sounds a bit technical whereas the rest of the text has a more romantic tone. You could use moreover.
- Yes, it's okay, but it sounds a bit technical whereas the rest of the text has a more romantic tone.
- You could use moreover.
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Yes, it's okay, but it sounds a bit technical whereas the rest of the text has a more romantic tone. You could use moreover. 
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