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Ayan86 Posted 11 years ago
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Is the underlined word okay here?

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Is the underlined word okay here? Other suggestions?

Throughout its activities, “Vix” has become a leader of the food industry, incorporating in the production of high quality products knowledge of food industry specialists and traditions.

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The first phrase is useless. There is no call for quotation marks around a company name. The rest of your sentence is almost unintelligible.

  • The first phrase is useless.
  • There is no call for quotation marks around a company name.
  • The rest of your sentence is almost unintelligible.
  • I suppose that you mean something like this: Vix has become a leader in the food industry , producing high quality products through the knowledge and traditions of their food specialists.
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The first phrase is useless. There is no call for quotation marks around a company name. The rest of your sentence is almost unintelligible. I suppose that you mean something like this:

Vix has become a leader in the food industry, producing high quality products through the knowledge and traditions of their food specialists.

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