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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Is the underlined structure okay in English?

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Is the underlined structure okay in English?

On January 4, 2008 Bobb met Dilan at the shopping center where he told him that Dino has already bought a ticket for a flight to Spain on January 16, 2012, so that he could be moved across the border of Spain and Portugal by train.

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The syntax is fine. The semantics is problematic.

  • The syntax is fine.
  • The semantics is problematic.
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The syntax is fine.
The semantics is problematic.
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Given that all the dates are past, I would change the third verb to "... Dino had already bought ..."

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