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Rommel Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Is the underlined sentence correctly written?

Is the underlined sentence correctly written?


Tony told Jake: "Don't ever get mad at your cheating father. Don't ever try to kill him. Take the time to keep a tight grip on your emotions rather spend your lifetime gripping prison bars tightly."

  

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" I'd rather remove the tightly, or move it to "tightly gripping prison bars".

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  • " I'd rather remove the tightly, or move it to "tightly gripping prison bars".
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Rommel Take the time to keep a tight grip on your emotions rather than spending your lifetime gripping prison bars tightly."

I'd rather remove the tightly, or move it to "tightly gripping prison bars".

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No.

eg Take the time to keep a tight grip on your emotions. Don't spend your lifetime gripping prison bars tightly.

eg Take the time to keep a tight grip on your emotions rather than spending your lifetime gripping prison bars tightly.

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