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Ayan86 Posted 10 years ago
Grammar
Is the underlined section fine?
Hi!
Is the underlined section fine?
During the marriage on June 1, 2004 their son, John XXX, was born, but on May 14, 2010 they had a daughter, Jenny XXX.
Thans
Is the underlined section fine?
During the marriage on June 1, 2004 their son, John XXX, was born, but on May 14, 2010 they had a daughter, Jenny XXX.
Thans
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", reads a bit oddly. It sounds as if they got married on June 1, 2004, and the son was born unexpectedly during the actual wedding ceremony (which I assume is not actually what you mean).
- ", reads a bit oddly.
- It sounds as if they got married on June 1, 2004, and the son was born unexpectedly during the actual wedding ceremony (which I assume is not actually what you mean).
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That part is OK, but the first part, "During the marriage ...", reads a bit oddly. It sounds as if they got married on June 1, 2004, and the son was born unexpectedly during the actual wedding ceremony (which I assume is not actually what you mean).
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