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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Is the underlined parts correct?

Hi!

Please take look at the following sentence!

During the cooperation on November 9, 2010 a social rehabilitation plan which provided for consultations by psychologist and addiction specialist and for cooperation with social rehabilitator in order to find a paid job was developed.

Can something be "during" and "on this date" at the same time?
Can I use "provided for" in this context?

Thanks a lot Emotion: smile
  

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I assume you are the same Anon writing the thread about Jane. The impression I got is, you tend to build your sentences with an over use of clauses, adverbials, which make reading it difficult. During- suggest a span of time, But " On" meant a specific date.

— Anonymous

  • I assume you are the same Anon writing the thread about Jane.
  • The impression I got is, you tend to build your sentences with an over use of clauses, adverbials, which make reading it difficult.
  • During- suggest a span of time, But " On" meant a specific date.
  • Also, " cooperation " suggests partnership, but there is no mention of it.
  • It is not very clear whether "social rehabilitation" is an agency, or the name of a social project (plan) which appeared to be the subject in the sentence.
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I assume you are the same Anon writing the thread about Jane. The impression I got is, you tend to build your sentences with an over use of clauses, adverbials, which make reading it difficult. During- suggest a span of time, But " On" meant a specific date. Also, " cooperation " suggests partnership, but there is no mention of it. It is not very clear whet
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AnonymousI assume you are the same Anon writing the thread about Jane
Yes. This same person has posted a large number of very similar questions. We have very patiently given advice for some months now, but prefer that they register, so we can help them better.
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