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Zuotengdazuo Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Is the underlined part OK?

The total income of 2009 is CNY 511,200, including a wage and subsidy of CNY 414,00 and a bonus of CNY 97,200;

Is the underlined part OK? And is the whole sentence OK?

Thank you.

  

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The words "wage" and "bonus" suggest a personal income from employment, whereas "subsidy" does not fit with that idea, so it seems a bit odd. "for 2009" seems more natural than "of 2009".

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  • The words "wage" and "bonus" suggest a personal income from employment, whereas "subsidy" does not fit with that idea, so it seems a bit odd.
  • "for 2009" seems more natural than "of 2009".
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The words "wage" and "bonus" suggest a personal income from employment, whereas "subsidy" does not fit with that idea, so it seems a bit odd.

"for 2009" seems more natural than "of 2009".

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