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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Is the underlined part grammatically correct?

Considering the aforementioned, on May 7, 2011 order No.223 was sent to the legal address of LLC “XXX” concerning deductions from the wage of John Smith, requesting to notify immediately after receipt of the order and commencement of the deductions.

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223 was sent to the legal address of LLC “***” concerning deductions from the wages of John Smith, requesting i mmediate notification upon receipt of the order and commencement of the deductions.

  • 223 was sent to the legal address of LLC “***” concerning deductions from the wages of John Smith, requesting i mmediate notification upon receipt of the order and commencement of the deductions.
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Considering the aforementioned, on May 7, 2011, order No.223 was sent to the legal address of LLC “***” concerning deductions from the wages of John Smith, requesting immediate notification upon receipt of the order and commencement of the deductions.

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