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Ayan86 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Is the underlined part fine?

Hi!
Is the underlined part fine?

The police officer joined the conversation and consequently issued an order for the defendant forbidding to approach the plaintiff and child for a year.

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Your sentence has grammar problems, and also meaning problems. Let's consider meaning. joined the conversation - sounds like people were just having a friendly chat consequently - I see no logical connection the police officer .

— Clive

  • Your sentence has grammar problems, and also meaning problems.
  • Let's consider meaning.
  • joined the conversation - sounds like people were just having a friendly chat consequently - I see no logical connection the police officer .
  • .
  • issued an order - judges, not police officers, issue orders like this.
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Your sentence has grammar problems, and also meaning problems.

Let's consider meaning.

joined the conversation - sounds like people were just having a friendly chat

consequently - I see no logical connection
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