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Gillyflower Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Is the underlined part correct?

Hi,

Does "respond to the appearance of" sound fine in the below sentence?

young drivers responded much faster to the appearance of pedestrians and reacted properly in such situations.


Thanks!

  

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gillyflower Hi, Does "respond to the appearance of" sound fine in the below sentence? Y oung drivers responded much faster to the pedestrians and reacted properly/ appropriately in such situations. I think you do not need "appearance" here, for it is understood that they were there.

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  • gillyflower Hi, Does "respond to the appearance of" sound fine in the below sentence?
  • Y oung drivers responded much faster to the pedestrians and reacted properly/ appropriately in such situations.
  • I think you do not need "appearance" here, for it is understood that they were there.
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gillyflower

Hi,

Does "respond to the appearance of" sound fine in the below sentence?

Young drivers responded much faster to the pedestrians and reacted properly/appropriately in such situations.



I think you do not need "ap

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