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0Hello! I'm translating a page of our corporate website from Russian into  English. Could you please tell me if there are  any grammatical mistakes in the text below? If  something doesn't sound natural, please let me know either :-)02br02br00IGNITION is an automobile magazine, which means our audience is interested  in modern cars and everything concerned with them. At that it's not just  interested. A substantial part of our visitors are potential buyers of new  vehicles. The other substantial part of our visitors are car owners, who (as is  well known) are far more potential buyers of new vehicles. The audience of  IGNITION is more than a million people a month. It's more than a drawing of the  majority of well-known paper automobile magazines taken together.02br02br00  We take orders for placing graphical advertisement on the pages of our magazine  and (in less quantities) on its cover. Since we live in Russia and our magazine  is in Russian language the prices are in Russian rubles (VAT exclusive).  Minimal order is 28 000 rubles. We offer discounts to our regular customers. And to advertising agencies too.0-

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01cite10Tyoma12cite10Hello! I'm translating a page of our corporate website from Russian into English. Could you please tell me if there are any grammatical mistakes in the text below? If something doesn't sound natural, please let me know either :-) 12br
10IGNITION is an automobile magazine11del~~10, which means our audience is12del~~11font11b10 [for anyone/all those]12b12font10 interested in modern cars and everything concerned with them. 11del~~10At that it's not just interested.12del~~10 11del~~10A substantial part of our visitors12del~~10 11b11font10[Many who visit the site] 12font12b10are potential buyers of new vehicles. 11del~~10The other substantial part of our12del~~10 11b11font10[Other]12font12b10visitors are car owners, who (as is well known) are 11del~~10far more12del~~10 potential buyers of new vehicles. The audience of IGNITION is more than a million people a month. It's more than 11del~~10a drawing of the majority of12del~~10 11b11font10[all the subscribers to] 12font12b10well-known11del~~10 paper 12del~~10automobile magazines11del~~10 taken together12del~~10.12br
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10 We 11del~~10take orders for placing graphical advertisement on the pages of 12del~~11b11font10are looking for advertisers who wish to be included in 12font12b10our magazine 11b11font10, with special positioning on the cover. 12font12b11del~~10and (in less quantities) on its cover12del~~10. Since we 11font11b10are based in 12b12font11b11font12font12b10Russia and our magazine is in Russian11del~~10 language 12del~~10the prices are in Russian rubles (VAT exclusive)11font10 11b10with a minimum charge of12b12font10 2811font11b10,12b12font10 000 rubles. We offer discounts to our regular customers11del~~10. And to advertising agencies too12del~~10.11b11font10and to advertising agencies. 12font12b12br
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Tyoma · Answer

0 Hello Feebs! Thank you very much for your answear. It is really very useful for me.02br
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00At the moment I'm working on the next part of the page, which is about our requirements to graphical banners. And I have the same questions. Is my translation correct? Does it sound natural?02br
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01cite10Tyoma12cite10Hello Feebs! Thank you very much for your answear. It is really very useful for me.12br
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10At the moment I'm working on the next part of the page, which is about our requirements 11b10relating to12b10 graphical banners. And I have the same questions. Is my translation correct? Does it sound natural?11h2
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10Those banners which don’t have borders look more beautiful and those which are not animated look even better (besides11font11b10,12b12font10 they work better).12br
10Banners cannot contain annoying animation, grammatical and orthographic mistakes11b11font10. T12font12b10hey also must comply with Russian legislation.12br
10The link for FLASH banners should be written in the on-release handler (11b10on (release) { }12b10) as follows: 11b10getURL(banner_href, "_blank");12b10 so that our system 11font11b10can12b12font10 count the clicks correctly. In that way11b11font10,12font12b10 after clicking on the banner the link will be opened in a new window.12br
10It’s a button which should be an object for the handler. 11font11b10Your attention is drawn12b12font11b11font12font12b10 to the absence 11b11font10of inv12font12b10erted commas in the first parameter11font11b10. This is12b12font11b11font12font12b10 very important. To do so, you should switch the entry field into the expression mode (‘=’). Here’s the explicative picture (Macromedia FLASH MX):12br
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10When publishing or exporting a banner, install FLASH-player 6 or lower and ActionScript 1.0. 12br
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Tyoma · Answer

0Feebs, thank you very much for your help. You're the best 050010id1

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