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TreeView Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Is the song correct

I'm trying to write a song. Please, help me.....
"Scaring place, bizarre melody.
I wish it was the
dream.But now they are calling
me. I can't stand their screams.
It's time of my last breath I
hope it will be quick death."
  

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Scar y place, bizarre melody. I wish it was a dream. But now they are calling me.

  • Scar y place, bizarre melody.
  • I wish it was a dream.
  • But now they are calling me.
  • I can't stand their screams.
  • It's time for my last breath.
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Scary place, bizarre melody.
I wish it was a dream.
But now they are calling me.
I can't stand their screams.
It's time for my last breath.
I hope it will be a quick death.
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Thanks you very much for your help!

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