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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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Is the sentence perfect as it is?

Jenny opens the door. It's Ben. They look at each other a moment. Then Ben asks "Can I come in?" Jenny looks at him another moment, then opens the door fully. Ben steps in, and casually looks around.

Questions:

1) Is the sentence in bold perfect as it is?

2) Can I place "casually" where I have?

  

Top answer

anonymous 1) Is the sentence in bold perfect as it is? Yes, but I prefer '... opens the door wide'.

— Rover_KE

  • anonymous 1) Is the sentence in bold perfect as it is?
  • Yes, but I prefer '...
  • opens the door wide'.
  • 2) Can I place "casually" where I have?
  • Yes.
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anonymous1) Is the sentence in bold perfect as it is? Yes, but I prefer '... opens the door wide'.
2) Can I place "casually" where I have? Yes.
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