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In the middle of the first period when the puck was at the contenders' zone the goalkeeper became unconscious and fell on the ice (or maybe I better use "fainted and fell "). Physicians for a few minutes tried to bring him into consciousness, but he had to leave the rink being carried.
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pupil In the middle of the first period when the puck was at the contenders' zone the goalkeeper became unconscious and fell on the ice (or maybe I better use "fainted and fell" [ no ] ). Physicians for a few minutes tried to bring him into consciousness, but he had to leave the rink being carried. This would be my version: In the middle of the first period, with the puck in the contenders' zone, the goalkeeper lost consciousness and fell on the ice.
- pupil In the middle of the first period when the puck was at the contenders' zone the goalkeeper became unconscious and fell on the ice (or maybe I better use "fainted and fell" [ no ] ).
- Physicians for a few minutes tried to bring him into consciousness, but he had to leave the rink being carried.
- This would be my version: In the middle of the first period, with the puck in the contenders' zone, the goalkeeper lost consciousness and fell on the ice.
- Physicians tried to revive him for a few minutes, but in the end he had to be carried off the rink on a stretcher.
- CJ
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pupilIn the middle of the first period when the puck was at the contenders' zone the goalkeeper became unconscious and fell on the ice (or maybe I better use "fainted and fell" [ no ]). Physicians for a few minutes tried to bring him into consciousness, but he had to leave the rink being carried.
This would be my v
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