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Jobb Posted 22 years ago
Grammar

Is the sentence okay?

Based on actual experience or perceptual knowledge would help you a lot, while without the experience or knowledge, you might feel not so easy to understand my introduction.
  

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Hi, The first half of the sentence sounds strange to me. What do you think? / otherwise you might feel...

  • Hi, The first half of the sentence sounds strange to me.
  • What do you think?
  • / otherwise you might feel...
  • Still feels odd.
  • Looking forward to right answers.
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Hi,

The first half of the sentence sounds strange to me. What do you think?
How about: Actual experience or perceptual knowledge would help you a lot (understand my words), while.../ otherwise you might feel...
Still feels odd. Looking forward to right answers.
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(1) If we used present participle, the sentence would become very ordinary:

Basing on actual experience or perceptual knowledge would help you a lot, while without the experience or knowledge you might feel not so easy to understand my introduction.

No doubt , the present participle and its object consist of the subject of the main clause, while "while without the e

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