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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Is the sentence OK as it is?

Hi teachers. Is the highlighted sentence OK as it is?

He steps through a door and into a corridor lined with glass offices. He starts down it, looking through the glass into each office as he passes.

  

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While he walked along the corridor, he looked through each glass office.

  • While he walked along the corridor, he looked through each glass office.
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While he walked along the corridor, he looked through each glass office.

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