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Tamguatlay Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Is the sentence natural?

With benefits derived from her faith in Christianity, her unbearable skin itching was cured.

Is the sentence natural? If not, how should it be rephrased?

Thanks.
  

Top answer

Her unbearable skin itching was cured with the help of her Christian faith. His eye is on the sparrow.

  • Her unbearable skin itching was cured with the help of her Christian faith.
  • His eye is on the sparrow.
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Her unbearable skin itching was cured with the help of her Christian faith.

His eye is on the sparrow.
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Mister MicawberHer unbearable skin itching was cured with the help of her Christian faith.His eye is on the sparrow.
Thanks, MM.

What do you mean by "His eye is on the sparrow"?
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Mister MicawberDid you do a search?
Yes. I just did.
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tamguatlayYes. I just did.
So did I. I had no idea what it meant.
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So I keep reading the last half in my head as "her unbearably itching skin was cured."

Maybe that's the more natural way to write it? Otherwise it is correct, but feels a little off. Like "skin itching" should be hyphenated to "skin-itching."

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