Context: Tammy is trapped in her car inside a parking garage where the exits are blocked. The parking garage is filled with zombies. Tammy is on the phone with her friends, Jill and Stephen.
Tammy: They're coming!
Jill: Who's coming? Tammy? Tammy? / Stephen: Who's coming, Tammy? Tammy?
All they hear is Tammy screaming as she speeds around the parking garage trying to escape the zombies.
- Is who's coming natural or should it be who are coming?
- Is the action sentence fine?
anonymous - Is who's coming natural Yes. anonymous or should it be who are coming ? NO!
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anonymous- Is who's coming natural
Yes.
anonymousor should it be who are coming?
NO!
anonymous- Is the action sentence fine?
Change "Tammy screaming" to "Tammy's screams" and all will be well with your sentence.