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Jobb Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
Is the sentence fine?
In the background of the photo was a wall, with a round quartz clock hanging there, which clearly showed the moment: 1:13:04PM, April 5, 2002.
Especially, is "with a round quartz clock hanging there" fine?
Especially, is "with a round quartz clock hanging there" fine?
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I'd get rid of the awkward comma this way: 'In the background of the photo was a wall, on which hung a round quartz clock clearly showing the moment: 1:13:04PM, April 5, 2002. '
- I'd get rid of the awkward comma this way: 'In the background of the photo was a wall, on which hung a round quartz clock clearly showing the moment: 1:13:04PM, April 5, 2002.
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I'd get rid of the awkward comma this way:
'In the background of the photo was a wall, on which hung a round quartz clock clearly showing the moment: 1:13:04PM, April 5, 2002. '
'In the background of the photo was a wall, on which hung a round quartz clock clearly showing the moment: 1:13:04PM, April 5, 2002. '
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