Is the sentence correct? How to correct the sentence? I have a poor English, sorry!
"The person in charge of planning activities of the new TV drama held a fan meeting in a department store square nearby my home, they will choose five people randomly as recipient of sneak peek at the first episode, or taking a picture with all the actors."
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Joshua Changrecipient of sneak peek at the first episode, or taking a picture with all the actors."
What does that mean?
Joshua Chang"The person in charge of planning activities
Actually, if I interpret the sentence correctly, you meant to say this:
The Television Company had a fanfare at the mall near my home to introduce the new drama. They will pick 5 people at random for the sneak preview of the first episode and a photo opportunity with the cast.
The director of publicity for the new TV drama held an event for fans in a department store near my home. Five of the fans were chosen randomly to get a sneak peek at the first episode and have their picture taken with all the actors.
1. I don't know what 'a department store square' is supposed to mean, so I guessed you meant some large room in the store where such an event could b