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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Is the sentence correct?

Is this a good sentence to use or shuld I reformulate it? If so:how? Make it more simpleperhaps?
"A lot of refugees are escaping their homelands because wars and bloodsheds are threatening their requirements to live a life in peace."
  

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Anonymous A lot of refugees are escaping their homelands because wars and bloodsheds are threatening their requirements to live a life in peace. A lot of people are fleeing their homelands because war and bloodshed are threatening their desire to live in peace. (They are only 'refugees' from the viewpoint of the countries they go to.

— CalifJim

  • Anonymous A lot of refugees are escaping their homelands because wars and bloodsheds are threatening their requirements to live a life in peace.
  • A lot of people are fleeing their homelands because war and bloodshed are threatening their desire to live in peace.
  • (They are only 'refugees' from the viewpoint of the countries they go to.
  • They're not 'refugees' yet at the time they decide to leave.
  • ) CJ
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AnonymousA lot of refugees are escaping their homelands because wars and bloodsheds are threatening their requirements to live a life in peace.
A lot of people are fleeing their homelands because war and bloodshed are threatening their desire to live in peace.

(They are only 'refugees' from the viewpoint of the countries they go to. They're not 'refu
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