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Wwj0905 Posted 11 years ago
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is the sentence correct?

Dear all, I wrote one sentence as below. Is it correct? How shall I improve the expression to make it better?

“In order to closely observe the small gold nanoparticles, additional measurements are carried out on the samples, and the results are shown in Figure 1.”

Thank you very much for your help.
  

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In order to closely observe the small gold nanoparticle samples , additional measurements were carried out . The results are shown in Figure 1.

  • In order to closely observe the small gold nanoparticle samples , additional measurements were carried out .
  • The results are shown in Figure 1.
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In order to closely observe the small gold nanoparticle samples, additional measurements were carried out. The results are shown in Figure 1.
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Thank you very much.
Mister MicawberIn order to closely observe the small gold nanoparticle samples, additional measurements were carried out. The results are shown in Figure 1.

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