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The sentence will be published on the page where the product demo pages will be randomly shown:

Here we showcase sample pages of what you can build using CompanyX software engine.

Is it ok from the grammar and style point of view? Will visitors understand it? Thanks!

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi Kedra,

The sentence will be published on the page where the product demo pages will be randomly shown:

Here we showcase sample pages of what you can build using CompanyX software engine.

Is it ok from the grammar and style point of view? Will visitors understand it? Thanks!

It's basically fine. I assume that what you are building are called 'pages'? If so, perhaps a bit better might be Here we showcase sample pages which you can build using Company X's software engine.

If not, then perhaps These pages showcase samples of what you can build using Company X's software engine.

Best wishes, Clive

Kedra · Answer

Hi Clive,

Thanks, it goes about the pages of the demo web site, which works on Company X software engine. So, I guess, the second variant is ok:

These pages showcase samples of what you can build using Company X's software engine.

Also, I thought about the following:

These screens showcase samples of what you can build using Company X's software engine.

I heard "screens" from many of our customers, who are native speakers and who call screenshots simply "screens". But I am not sure I can use "screens" in the sentence. Anyway, I am going to use your variant. I appreciate your help.

Clive · Answer

Hi Kedra,

'Screens' sounds OK, too.

Clive

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