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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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Is the sentence concise?

Dear Sir,

Please advise whether the following sentence is clear, concise and concrete. Thanks in advance!

In the 21st century of education reform, the flipped classroom is very popular, almost instead of the traditional classroom (face-to-face and sit-and-listen lecture model setting).
  

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Anonymous Anonymous wrote: Is the sentence concise? No, and it is not very accurate. The flipped classroom has become very popular, replacing the traditional classroom's lectures and homework assignments with online instruction at home and activities in the class.

  • Anonymous Anonymous wrote: Is the sentence concise?
  • No, and it is not very accurate.
  • The flipped classroom has become very popular, replacing the traditional classroom's lectures and homework assignments with online instruction at home and activities in the class.
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AnonymousAnonymous wrote: Is the sentence concise?
No, and it is not very accurate.

The flipped classroom has become very popular, replacing the traditional classroom's lectures and homework assignments with online instruction at home and activities in the class.
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In the 21st century of education reform, This suggests that the education reform process has been going on for over 2,000 years, Is this really what you mean?

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