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Goldenboy1 Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

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Could you please send an email to the residents to give us access on the 27 November to replace the door handles to their in bedroom?

  

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Please email the residents asking them to to give us access to their apartments on 27 November to replace the bedroom door handles.

  • Please email the residents asking them to to give us access to their apartments on 27 November to replace the bedroom door handles.
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Please email the residents asking them to to give us access to their apartments on 27 November to replace the bedroom door handles.

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