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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Is the semicolon use the best choice here?

Both groups had heard of the approaching army and wished to join with it; the plainsmen out of greed for dwarven gold, and the Neidar to avenge their pride.
  

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I'd just use a comma. And remove the comma after 'gold'.

  • I'd just use a comma.
  • And remove the comma after 'gold'.
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I'd just use a comma.
And remove the comma after 'gold'.

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