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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Is the semicolon use a correct choice?

Some three thousand years later, distressed at the arrogance and conceit of many of his chosen, Reorx cursed them with short bodies and the burning need to create, combined with the inability to ever be satisfied with their creations; thus the first gnomes were born.
  

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It's not wrong. But I'd use a period. It adds a little more emphasis and drama, in my opinion.

  • It's not wrong.
  • But I'd use a period.
  • It adds a little more emphasis and drama, in my opinion.
  • Clive
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It's not wrong.
But I'd use a period. It adds a little more emphasis and drama, in my opinion.


Clive

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