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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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Is the scenario written in a natural way?

The driver loses control of the car. He hits the brakes. The car spins wildly before skidding to a stop, bumping softly into a lamppost with just enough impact to set off the airbag.


Is the scenario written in a natural way? Could you picture it? Please make changes that you think could improve it. Thank you.


  

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I'd say gently instead of softly. And streetlight (American English) instead of lamppost (BrE).

— Clive

  • I'd say gently instead of softly.
  • And streetlight (American English) instead of lamppost (BrE).
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I'd say gently instead of softly.

And streetlight (American English) instead of lamppost (BrE).

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