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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Is the rap good

i am from Germany and i am not so good in english ,

can someone correct it , please .

its an deep gangstar rap.
it will dark , the human will greedy , the good feeling leaves me.
flesh is the aim thus everybody will harpy
lil girls are materialistic like the bitch barbie
for that
we"ll heartless and ugly like the fucking zombie. ,
because there ist love,
you going to paronoid ,
smoking weed aint help you but rather it makes you to a ghetto kid.
G-s
want run away ,the cops discriminated the muslims as dumb terrorists,
the only thing what they know is the fight, against themselves and they think sucide
unless there arent money . the drug dealing is easiest way for the humans.
only a brave man are able to speak the trueness.
some people think , that we do everything for the coolness.
its a struggle , which test you loyalty.
drug dealing , hate , murder and betrayer is just a normality.
the state can only help , by they forget us and give a fuck
thus we hate the disloyal society
the autumm lead into disaster ,
i dont know , why god dont hear my prayers.
its a game , and we are our leading players.
they spy out , if friend or dreaming neighbor.
the stress changes the laughter ,
autumm is third chapter and we play the role
and lord ist the holy drafters ,
if you find nothing to live , you will find a place to die ,
if a evil or a good soul.
  

Top answer

No. If your English is not good, then work on your standard English. Gangster rap is beyond your ken.

  • No.
  • If your English is not good, then work on your standard English.
  • Gangster rap is beyond your ken.
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No. If your English is not good, then work on your standard English. Gangster rap is beyond your ken.

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