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Bakeros1987 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Is the punctuation in the sentence correct?

1. Another minor but increasingly popular form of advertising is cooperative advertising, in which the manufacturer shares the expense of radio or newspaper advertising with the retailer who signs the advertisment.

2. A relatively minor but important form of advertising is institutional advertising, which is designed solely to build prestige and public respect for particular business concerns as important American institutions.

3.Both, consumer and trade advertising, employ many specialised types of commercial persuasion.

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#1 and #2 look OK. Both commas in #3 should be deleted.

  • #1 and #2 look OK.
  • Both commas in #3 should be deleted.
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#1 and #2 look OK.

Both commas in #3 should be deleted.
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Hi,

1. Another minor but increasingly popular form of advertising is cooperative advertising, in which the manufacturer shares the expense of radio or newspaper advertising with the retailer who signs the advertisment. OK

2. A relatively minor but important form of advertising is institutional advertising, which is designed solely to build prestige and public respect fo
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Many thanks to both of you Emotion: smile

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