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Kedra Posted 20 years ago
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Is the passage correct?
As usual, I have doubts as per the below passage grammar and style. I appreciate any advice. Thanks!
Full automation of your business
Taken online, your business brings money round the clock. The property management software, which your rental portal is based on, automates guest-owner negotiations, accepts payments, tracks the statistics, shows property photos, displays the available/ reserved dates for a property, and what not. The best thing about it is that it requires no involvement from your side.
Money Flow
You may charge property owners for being listed on your rental portal. This is more convenient than to take some commission on every rent. Stable regular income is better than one time commission “jackpots” from rents; at least if you intend to be in the business for a long time. Still, no involvement from your side is needed. Owners can simply pay the membership fee via a built-in credit card processor. You may clean your teeth, sleep, eat, do whatever you want to do; Internet makes no difference when to accept payments from eager property owners to your online account.
Full automation of your business
Taken online, your business brings money round the clock. The property management software, which your rental portal is based on, automates guest-owner negotiations, accepts payments, tracks the statistics, shows property photos, displays the available/ reserved dates for a property, and what not. The best thing about it is that it requires no involvement from your side.
Money Flow
You may charge property owners for being listed on your rental portal. This is more convenient than to take some commission on every rent. Stable regular income is better than one time commission “jackpots” from rents; at least if you intend to be in the business for a long time. Still, no involvement from your side is needed. Owners can simply pay the membership fee via a built-in credit card processor. You may clean your teeth, sleep, eat, do whatever you want to do; Internet makes no difference when to accept payments from eager property owners to your online account.
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Taken online, your business - this makes it sound as if you are talking about their existing business brings money - can earn money and what not - spell out all the services. to take some commission - taking commission Stable regular - A stable OR A regular income Internet makes no difference when to accept payments . - the internet means that you can accept payments from eager property owners to your online account at any time.
- Taken online, your business - this makes it sound as if you are talking about their existing business brings money - can earn money and what not - spell out all the services.
- to take some commission - taking commission Stable regular - A stable OR A regular income Internet makes no difference when to accept payments .
- - the internet means that you can accept payments from eager property owners to your online account at any time.
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Taken online, your business - this makes it sound as if you are talking about their existing business
brings money - can earn money
and what not - spell out all the services.
to take some commission - taking commission
Stable regular - A stable OR A regular income
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brings money - can earn money
and what not - spell out all the services.
to take some commission - taking commission
Stable regular - A stable OR A regular income
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<brings money - can earn money>
Would you accept "brings in money"'
<Stable regular - A stable OR A regular income>
"Stable" could mean unchanging in scale/amount there. So, we could use "a regular, stable income".
Would you accept "brings in money"'
<Stable regular - A stable OR A regular income>
"Stable" could mean unchanging in scale/amount there. So, we could use "a regular, stable income".
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