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Tamguatlay Posted 11 years ago
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Is the part in bold OK?

Eventually, I agreed to be baptised during the morning sermon that day, which was 7 August 2011.

Is the part in bold OK?

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tamguatlay Is the part in bold OK? Awkward and unnatural. Just use an appositive: Eventually, I agreed to be baptised during the morning sermon that day, 7 August 2011.

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  • tamguatlay Is the part in bold OK?
  • Awkward and unnatural.
  • Just use an appositive: Eventually, I agreed to be baptised during the morning sermon that day, 7 August 2011.
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tamguatlayIs the part in bold OK?
Awkward and unnatural. Just use an appositive:

Eventually, I agreed to be baptised during the morning sermon that day, 7 August 2011.
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