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Jiangsu Power Transmission and Transformation Corporation (JPTTC) was founded in year 1953. It is situated on the north foot of the Purple Mountain in Nanjing, and is the sole subsidiary of Jiangsu Power Corporation. JPTTC is state-owned large power construction enterprise capable of acting as an independent legal person with Grade I Certificate for Power Projects Construction Contracting issued by State Ministry of Construction. As one of the few enterprises under State Power Corporation that have the right to handle foreign business independently, JPPTC has constructed numbers of projects in over ten provinces in China, and in the countries of Pakistan, Bengal and Ghana.
Jiangsu Power Transmission and Transformation Corporation (JPTTC) was founded in year 1953. It is situated on the north foot of the Purple Mountain in Nanjing, and is the sole subsidiary of Jiangsu Power Corporation. JPTTC is state-owned large power construction enterprise capable of acting as an independent legal person with Grade I Certificate for Power Projects Construction Contracting issued by State Ministry of Construction. As one of the few enterprises under State Power Corporation that have the right to handle foreign business independently, JPPTC has constructed numbers of projects in over ten provinces in China, and in the countries of Pakistan, Bengal and Ghana.
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Gee, this looks familiar... 'Jiangsu Power Transmission and Transformation Corporation (JPTTC) was founded in 1953. It is situated at the north foot of Purple Mountain in Nanjing, and is the sole subsidiary of Jiangsu Power Corporation.
- Gee, this looks familiar...
- 'Jiangsu Power Transmission and Transformation Corporation (JPTTC) was founded in 1953.
- It is situated at the north foot of Purple Mountain in Nanjing, and is the sole subsidiary of Jiangsu Power Corporation.
- JPTTC is a large, state-owned power construction enterprise capable of acting as a legally independent entity with Grade I Certification for Power Projects Construction Contracting issued by the State Ministry of Construction.
- As one of the few enterprises under the State Power Corporation that have the right to handle foreign business independently, JPPTC has developed a number of projects in over ten [YOU SHOULD SUPPLY THE EXACT NUMBER HERE, JOBB-- 11?
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Gee, this looks familiar...
'Jiangsu Power Transmission and Transformation Corporation (JPTTC) was founded in 1953. It is situated at the north foot of Purple Mountain in Nanjing, and is the sole subsidiary of Jiangsu Power Corporation. JPTTC is a large, state-owned power construction enterprise capable of acting as a legally independent entity with Grade I Certification for Power
'Jiangsu Power Transmission and Transformation Corporation (JPTTC) was founded in 1953. It is situated at the north foot of Purple Mountain in Nanjing, and is the sole subsidiary of Jiangsu Power Corporation. JPTTC is a large, state-owned power construction enterprise capable of acting as a legally independent entity with Grade I Certification for Power
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I especailly appreciate the rewriting "JPTTC is a large, state-owned power construction enterprise capable of acting as a legally independent entity with Grade I Certification for Power Projects Construction Contracting issued by the State Ministry of Construction."
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