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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
Is the grammar used correctly in the paragraph?
My Experience
After graduation, I got a job in ibbl. There my job responsibility was to .... . There I became acquainted with many real world technologies such as ... As a result of testing the software extensively I got such an in-depth idea of the application that I was appointed to train the bankers in different sessions. I did very well there as evidenced by my top rating which were rated by the trainees.
After graduation, I got a job in ibbl. There my job responsibility was to .... . There I became acquainted with many real world technologies such as ... As a result of testing the software extensively I got such an in-depth idea of the application that I was appointed to train the bankers in different sessions. I did very well there as evidenced by my top rating which were rated by the trainees.
Top answer
I would not use the abbreviation 'ibbl' (perhaps you did not actually use it)--also, the rest is good, except for the last sentence. "
- I would not use the abbreviation 'ibbl' (perhaps you did not actually use it)--also, the rest is good, except for the last sentence.
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I would not use the abbreviation 'ibbl' (perhaps you did not actually use it)--also, the rest is good, except for the last sentence. Try: "These trainees gave me a top rating for my work."
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