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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Is the grammar \ punctuation correct? Thanks.

Thank you for supporting Fire in the Park.

You made it possible for folks to have fun.

All day long, people were tasting the chili’s.

Crowds were cheering the firefighter’s as they competed.

Children were smiling and laughing, hammering, sliding and tossing balloons.

Neighbors reminisced around the antique fire trucks.

Fans were dancing and singing along with Patrick Lamb.

We all saluted and applauded the pipers and drummers.

Thank you for donating.

Donating time. Donating funds. Donating your spirit.

Thank you for your encouragement and for celebrating charity.
  

Top answer

It sounds like it was a very enjoyable event! Thank you for supporting "Fire in the Park". You made it possible for folks to have fun.

  • It sounds like it was a very enjoyable event!
  • Thank you for supporting "Fire in the Park".
  • You made it possible for folks to have fun.
  • All day long, people were tasting the chili.
  • Crowds were cheering the firefighte rs as they competed.
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It sounds like it was a very enjoyable event!

Thank you for supporting "Fire in the Park".
You made it possible for folks to have fun.
All day long, people were tasting the chili.
Crowds were cheering the firefighters as they competed.
Children were smiling and laughing, hammering, sliding and tossing balloons.
Neighbors reminisced around the antique fir

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